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What Could Be Me?

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I'm a gentle spirit
Prone to violence
I can hurt you
And feel bad about it
I'm a child's laughter
See my smile stretch
Across my face
Trace a dimple on the right
I'm a lover
Known to hate others
I can hold a grudge
And still come to help
I'm a headache
Every word I utter
Is louder then the last
But my silence lasts forever
I'm a dreamer
See me in all my craziness
See me in my dizziness
See me and my twisted personality
I'm a dreamer
Watch me fly away from here
To a world where I'm not scared
Where the pain I've caused
Never happened
Where life is never hard
I'm a dreamer
I can sit for hours
Just thinking of what could be
What could be me?
Idk about you but that may have been the most confusing poem I've ever written. Let me know if it sucks.

I have entered this into the "Identity" contest for :iconlooselacespoetry:

Edit: Over the next few days (maybe even weeks) I will be editing a lot of my work as I try to prepare them for my book, yes book. If you have been reading my journal you'd know that. Anyways I'm sry if I flood your messages but I want to know when they are good and when they suck. Thank you for your time. lol
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Hill-dan's avatar
It must go to the book.

hey, I think this is a good title for your book, if you still don't got any: If my thoughts were poetry.
I dunno, that's just a suggestion, dear.