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What is fear
But a twisted feeling
That tears apart your heart?
An awkward silence
An unknown future
Or just a creature in the dark

As tears well up
You scream and cry
You might even run
But whether fears
Are small or big
They're never any fun

And how I hate to say
While I am strong
I have fears of my own
Of what's unknown
And truth be told
To sometimes be alone

I hate white vans
With tinted windows
That sometimes drive to slow
I'll walk real fast
When the lights are off
For reasons I'll never know

I'll cover my face
When watching movies
That have blood in all the scenes
I can fear heights
When they get too high
I fall up in all my dreams

All in all
The list goes on
Each more irrational then the last
But in the end
You can say you're brave
But really you think too fast

Take some time
To think about
You're past and who you are
You can stand real tall
And act real strong
But it will not get you far

But fears can be
Really anything
From big to very small
From fearing death
Or fearing heights
Or everything above all

Now tell me
What do you fear?
Yeah I know it sucks but I felt like I should get something up so yeah. I couldn't do a good rhyming poem if my life depended on it.

Edit: I can't believe this is my most favorited. I thought it was going to suck.
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Hill-dan Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
omg, it's the great poem of yours!

good work!
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trevor4056 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010
rly? i thought it sucked.
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Hill-dan Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
=)
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torkZD Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2010
i really like this it makes me think
great job =D
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trevor4056 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2010
Thanks! :D
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sasori778 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Its really good.

Poems don't have to rhyme though, mine never do.
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trevor4056 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010
:D Yeah I tried but then my first stanza rhymed and there was no turning back.
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sasori778 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
No going back then~

Still cool.
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trevor4056 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010
:D Thanks.
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sasori778 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
No problemo~
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